A haiku, by spudtater.

[spudtater]

*Clears throat*

Unblemished sand dune
Bids the child run across it
Feet spoil perfection

Comments

[martling.livejournal.com]

Common omission
from old poetic style:
seasonal reference.

[spudtater.livejournal.com]

Yes, yes.
I figured that in a desert, seasons are pretty much irrelevant.
The rules of haiku are meant to be broken, anyway.   8^)

[neuralbuddha.livejournal.com]

Rather beautiful.

Oh no,
I can't be old already
I'm just about to..

Sent to my in a birthday card from my sister.